Here are two examples of the audience responses that we have already collected. We are hoping to collect a lot more of these. But you can see how people respond along the same lines. I think we can be quite proud of some of the responses we are getting back as they are quite positive.
Well done for getting good feedback on your sequence; could you now write up a post summarising the feedback you've received overall? Has the ffedback caused you to make any further changes?
ReplyDeleteOverall your blog is very good Sarah, I get a real sense of the progress of the project and of your personal contribution; well done. My main criticism would be that I think your earlier posts are not quite as good as your later ones; you need to go back to your analyses of existing title sequences and try to add more detail. This will show YOUR knowledge and understanding and improve your grade.
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